Saturday, July 23, 2011

Things That Never Change





Once upon a time there was a girl who kept bleeding

and bleeding

and bleeding

and bleeding

and never dying

and no body was impressed by her magic.

For God's sake, they kept calling it Magic.

Friday, July 8, 2011

Order of Operations

I've been playing with a new way to write, I named it, "backwards." I've been toying with the idea of HOW you say something, rather than what you say, and inadvertently, the order things that are said matter too.
Should I just show you what I mean?

I mean you can tell 2 ENTIRELY different stories using the exact same words/dialogue/lines.
Ok look:

--Story One--


Then, we didn't talk very much.

She was spending a lot of time with her ex.

But she moved away for school!

I supported her education.

Suddenly we were making plans together.

We were madly in love!


Here's number 2



We were madly love!

Suddenly we were making plans together.

I supported her education.

But she moved away for school.

She was spending a lot of time with her ex.

Then, we didn't talk very much.



Now that you know the fate of each story, go back and read each line harder, and the stories will become more and more true.
Get it?